As for the key insights you had at each point, I didn’t mean so much for you to present the intermediate insights you had at each point (because that’s clearly not the thrust of these posts), but rather to work out what the core part of each stage of your journey was and present those as clearly as possible, only putting in as much detail as is necessary to carry those central points.
This is good advice though. I don’t think I’m going go back and make large revisions to the post (could change my mind on that), but if I were writing it again for the first time I would probably cut down the amount of detail.
This is good advice though. I don’t think I’m going go back and make large revisions to the post (could change my mind on that), but if I were writing it again for the first time I would probably cut down the amount of detail.